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UPPCS · GS-II
12 marks“Knows the facts, not the argument.”
Directive check
Directive «Discuss» = sides + limits + conclusion — incomplete.
Parameter scores
Opens with background instead of the question. Define the term and take a position in the first two lines.
Reads as one block. Break it into clear sections that follow the directive.
Thin on substance. The core concepts the question rests on are missing.
No articles, cases, committee reports or data. This is the cheapest place to gain marks.
Stops rather than concludes. Close with a forward-looking line.
Dense paragraphs. Headings and shorter paragraphs would help the examiner.
What worked
3Cited a relevant example.
Clear structure.
Attempted a conclusion.
Improve next time
4Tie the intro directly to the question.
Add data points.
Evaluate each point, don't just list.
End with a way forward.
Missing from your answer
3Relevant 2nd ARC recommendation.
2nd ARC Report 4
The governing constitutional article.
Constitution Art. 163
A state-specific scheme linkage.
UP scheme registry
What a strong answer looks like
5Define + link to the question
For: 2 arguments + a datum
Against/limits: 2 points
Example / case
Way-forward conclusion
Track every parameter across attempts, re-write the same question at half price, and watch the delta.